Hello,I am Rose.I am a girl.I am eight.I have a ball.like to eat an ice-cream.I am happy.My little brother is three.He is happy ，too.My father is tall.My mother is short.My father like to eat apple.My mother like to eat orange.We are happy.名师点评：you must be a pretty girl! your recomment is very detailed!小作者用英语介绍了自己，从爱好、家庭等方面出发，让我们认识了这个可爱活泼的小女孩和这一个温馨幸福的家庭。文章表达清楚，条理整齐，语法准确。。但是小作者以后在英语写作中要注意哦，单词之间一定要有空格。（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2009-6-26 19:12:00